I think the change in section 4 "Performance implications" is incorrect:

in -01:
the total number of upstream queries under qname
minimisation would be counter-intuitively less than the number of
queries under the traditional iteration

in -02:
the total number of upstream queries under qname
minimisation would be counter-intuitively inferior to the number of
queries under the traditional iteration

-- But "less than" is better, not 'inferior' ?
I think "less than" is the proper wording.






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On Wed, Mar 4, 2015 at 7:53 AM, <internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations Working
> Group of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : DNS query name minimisation to improve privacy
>         Author          : Stephane Bortzmeyer
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-qname-minimisation-02.txt
>         Pages           : 9
>         Date            : 2015-03-04
>
> Abstract:
>    This document describes one of the techniques that could be used to
>    improve DNS privacy (see [I-D.ietf-dprive-problem-statement]), a
>    technique called "qname minimisation".
>
>    REMOVE BEFORE PUBLICATION Discussions of the document should take
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>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
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>
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