> On Oct 2, 2015, at 1:09 AM, Simon Josefsson <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
>>> I believe the abstract or introduction section should mention that
>>> TLS gives you data integrity services, which protects against
>>> on-path tampering.  Right now the document talks about encryption
>>> to protect against eavesdropping.  However, the RFC 7258 pervasive
>>> monitoring attack includes active attacks and thus I believe
>>> talking about integrity is useful to set the context right.
>> 
>> I've added a short sentence to the abstract:
>> 
>> @@ -169,7 +169,9 @@
>>         This document describes the use of TLS to provide privacy
>>         for DNS.  Encryption provided by TLS eliminates opportunities
>>         for eavesdropping on DNS queries in the network, such as
>> -        discussed in RFC 7258.  In addition, this document specifies
>> +        discussed in RFC 7258.
>> +        TLS also protects against on-path tampering.
>> +        In addition, this document specifies
>>         two usage profiles for DNS-over-TLS and provides advice on
>>         performance considerations to minimize overhead from using
>>         TCP and TLS with DNS.
> 
> Hi Duane.  Thank you.  7258 also talks about active attacks.  So
> maybe it reads better to say:
> 
>  Encryption provided by TLS eliminates opportunities for eavesdropping
>  and on-path tampering with DNS queries in the network, such as
>  discussed in RFC 7258.


Thanks, this change has been made.

DW

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