To clarify, these aren’t the changes from a week ago but for the whole document this time. Sorry for the top post.
> On Sep 8, 2022, at 4:10 PM, Neil Anuskiewicz <[email protected]> wrote: > > > I went ahead and committed my changes. I hope these small changes are > helpful. > > Neil > >> On Sat, Aug 27, 2022 at 9:12 PM John R Levine <[email protected]> wrote: >> If you're feeling really enterprising you can do a github pull request, >> but sending the suggested changes to this list is fine. >> >> On Sat, 27 Aug 2022, Neil Anuskiewicz wrote: >> >> > Cool! I'll proofread the whole document within two weeks unless there's a >> > tighter timeline. I've heard talk on the list about rounding the bend on >> > the last lap to the finish. >> > >> > In addition to proofreading, I'd rewrite for clarity here and there. Then, >> > of course, you could reject any of it. >> > >> > How exactly would I submit my proposed changes? Thanks. >> > >> > Neil >> > >> > On Sat, Aug 27, 2022 at 7:14 PM John Levine <[email protected]> wrote: >> > >> >> Thanks, we can always use more proofreading. I'll put those in the next >> >> pull request. >> >> >> >> >> >> It appears that Neil Anuskiewicz <[email protected]> said: >> >>> -=-=-=-=-=- >> >>> >> >>> I'm not sure if minor things like misspellings, grammar, and other >> >> minutia >> >>> are useful. I figured I'd try to contribute in a small way. If these >> >>> kinds >> >>> of suggestions are useful, let me know, and I can do more in the future >> >> and >> >>> maybe dive into slightly more. >> >>> >> >>> 1. Introduction says: >> >>> >> >>> Abusive email often includes unauthorized and deceptive use of a domain >> >>> name in the "From" *heaader* field defined in [RFC5322] and *refered* to >> >> as >> >>> RFC5322.From. >> >>> >> >>> It should say: >> >>> >> >>> Abusive email often includes unauthorized and deceptive use of a domain >> >>> name in the "From" *header* field defined in [RFC5322] and *referred* to >> >> as >> >>> RFC5322.From. >> >>> >> >>> 6. DMARC Feedback >> >>> >> >>> When Domain Owners can see what effect their policies and practices are >> >>> having, they are *better* willing and able to use quarantine and reject >> >>> policies. >> >>> >> >>> It should say: >> >>> >> >>> When Domain Owners can see what effect their policies and practices are >> >>> having, they are *more* willing and able to use quarantine and reject >> >>> policies. >> >>> >> >>> 7. Changes from RFC 7489 says: >> >>> >> >>> This section will summarize *thos* changes. >> >>> >> >>> It should say: >> >>> >> >>> This section will summarize *those* changes. >> >>> >> >>> Thanks. >> >>> >> >>> Neil >> >>> >> >>> -=-=-=-=-=- >> >>> [Alternative: text/html] >> >>> -=-=-=-=-=- >> >> >> >> >> >> >> > >> >> Regards, >> John Levine, [email protected], Taughannock Networks, Trumansburg NY >> "I dropped the toothpaste", said Tom, crestfallenly.
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