Hello,
> == Scope ==
> * Other developers: Unknown.
> * Policies and guidelines: May need updates for RpmOstree.
This is too vague.  What basis do have the other developers for commenting 
about how they would be affected, knowing only the above?

> == Detailed Description ==
> The original Changes/Atomic_Cloud_Image was a host system delivered just as a
> cloud image. This Change for Fedora 22 expands it to a multitude of delivery
> vehicles:
OK, “expands… delivery vehicles”.

> == Contingency Plan ==
> If something fails and this product can't ship, some upgrade mechanism for
> Fedora 21 Atomic Cloud Image users would need to be evaluated.

How is this related to “expanding… delivery vehicles” as described above?  The 
F21 cloud image is the original delivery vehicle, not one of the expanded ones. 
 Is this a copy&paste from one of the other Change proposals, or a missing part 
in the Detailed Description?
    Mirek
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