Hi Igor
I want to return to my initial comments regarding this patch.
Please, find my comments below.
> On 1. 11. 2023., at 06:24, Igor Kulchytskyy <ig...@ami.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Mike,
> Thank you for review.
> Please see my answers below the text.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Mike Maslenkin <mike.maslen...@gmail.com>
> Sent: Tuesday, October 31, 2023 9:00 PM
> To: devel@edk2.groups.io; Igor Kulchytskyy <ig...@ami.com>
> Cc: Abner Chang <abner.ch...@amd.com>; Nickle Wang <nick...@nvidia.com>
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [edk2-devel] [PATCH] RedfishPkg: RedfishDiscoverDxe:
> Fix issue if IPv4 installed after RestEx
>
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> Hi Igor
>
> please find my comments below.
>
> On Tue, Oct 31, 2023 at 8:56 PM Igor Kulchytskyy via groups.io
> <igork=ami....@groups.io> wrote:
>>
>> Supported function of the driver changed to wait for all newtwork
>> interface to be installed.
>> Filer out the network interfaces which are not supported by
>> Redfish Host Interface.
>>
>> Cc: Abner Chang <abner.ch...@amd.com>
>> Cc: Nickle Wang <nick...@nvidia.com>
>> Cc: Igor Kulchytskyy <ig...@ami.com>
>> Signed-off-by: Igor Kulchytskyy <ig...@ami.com>
>> ---
>> RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c | 96 ++++++++++++++++++--
>> 1 file changed, 89 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
>>
>> diff --git a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
>> b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
>> index 23da3b968f..a88ad55938 100644
>> --- a/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
>> +++ b/RedfishPkg/RedfishDiscoverDxe/RedfishDiscoverDxe.c
>> @@ -322,9 +322,15 @@ GetTargetNetworkInterfaceInternal (
>> {
>> EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL *ThisNetworkInterface;
>>
>> + if (IsListEmpty(&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface)) {
>> + return NULL;
>> + }
>> +
>> ThisNetworkInterface = (EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL
>> *)GetFirstNode (&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface);
>> while (TRUE) {
>> - if (CompareMem ((VOID *)&ThisNetworkInterface->MacAddress,
>> &TargetNetworkInterface->MacAddress, ThisNetworkInterface->HwAddressSize) ==
>> 0) {
>> + if (CompareMem ((VOID *)&ThisNetworkInterface->MacAddress,
>> &TargetNetworkInterface->MacAddress, ThisNetworkInterface->HwAddressSize) ==
>> 0 &&
>> + ((TargetNetworkInterface->IsIpv6 &&
>> ThisNetworkInterface->NetworkProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp6) ||
>> + (!TargetNetworkInterface->IsIpv6 &&
>> ThisNetworkInterface->NetworkProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp4))) {
>> return ThisNetworkInterface;
>> }
>>
>> @@ -354,6 +360,10 @@ GetTargetNetworkInterfaceInternalByController (
>> {
>> EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL *ThisNetworkInterface;
>>
>> + if (IsListEmpty(&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface)) {
>> + return NULL;
>> + }
>> +
>
> I also have these two hunks in my pending list.
> But I suggest to add ASSERT to GetTargetNetworkInterfaceInternal, just
> because currently it is really impossible situation,
> and mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface was checked before in scope of
> ValidateTargetNetworkInterface().
>
> Igor: Agree.
> I also just noticed that even if GetTargetNetworkInterfaceInternal function
> may return NULL, the return value is not verified on NULL in
> RedfishServiceAcquireService function.
> I think we should add this verification.
>
>
> Also I wonder why check patch doesn't complain about missed spaces in
> "IsListEmpty (&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface)" call for example.
>
>> ThisNetworkInterface = (EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL
>> *)GetFirstNode (&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface);
>> while (TRUE) {
>> if (ThisNetworkInterface->OpenDriverControllerHandle ==
>> ControllerHandle) {
>> @@ -476,6 +486,38 @@ CheckIsIpVersion6 (
>> return FALSE;
>> }
>>
>> +/**
>> + This function returns the IP type supported by the Host Interface
>> +
>> + @retval IP Type
>> + // Unknown=00h,
>> + // Ipv4=01h,
>> + // Ipv6=02h,
>> +
>> +**/
>> +UINT8
>
> STATIC ?
> Igor: WHY?
>
I remembered discussion about STATIC functions usage and why it isn't common in
edk2.
AFAIR it was because of difficulties with source level debugging for the case
when it could be inlined.
BTW I won't insist on this here.
>> +GetHiIpProtocolType()
>> +{
>> + EFI_STATUS Status;
>> + REDFISH_OVER_IP_PROTOCOL_DATA *Data;
>> + REDFISH_INTERFACE_DATA *DeviceDescriptor;
>> +
>> + Data = NULL;
>> + DeviceDescriptor = NULL;
>> + if (mSmbios == NULL) {
>> + Status = gBS->LocateProtocol (&gEfiSmbiosProtocolGuid, NULL, (VOID
>> **)&mSmbios);
>> + if (EFI_ERROR (Status)) {
>> + return 0;
>
> In this driver REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_IP{4,6}
> used and accessible.
> so, 0 means REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_UNKNOWN
> And these values actually checked in scope of BuildupNetworkInterface() below.
> Igor: Thank you. Missed that macro.
>
>> + }
>> + }
>> + Status = RedfishGetHostInterfaceProtocolData (mSmbios, &DeviceDescriptor,
>> &Data); // Search for SMBIOS type 42h
>> + if (!EFI_ERROR (Status) && (Data != NULL) &&
>> + (Data->HostIpAssignmentType == RedfishHostIpAssignmentStatic)) {
>> + return Data->HostIpAddressFormat;
>> + }
>> + return 0;
>
> Same here, 0 is a magic value for
> REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_UNKNOWN
>
>> +}
>> +
>> /**
>> This function discover Redfish service through SMBIOS host interface.
>>
>> @@ -512,6 +554,15 @@ DiscoverRedfishHostInterface (
>>
>> Status = RedfishGetHostInterfaceProtocolData (mSmbios, &DeviceDescriptor,
>> &Data); // Search for SMBIOS type 42h
>> if (!EFI_ERROR (Status) && (Data != NULL) && (DeviceDescriptor != NULL)) {
>> +
>> + if (Instance->NetworkInterface->NetworkProtocolType == ProtocolTypeTcp4
>> && Data->HostIpAddressFormat !=
>> REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_IP4) { // IPv4 case
>> + DEBUG((DEBUG_ERROR, "%a: Network Interface is IPv4, but Host
>> Interface requires Ipv6\n"));
>
> Missed argument for %a format
> Missed space "DEBUG (("
>
> Igor: Inattentiveness. Thank you.
>
>> + return EFI_UNSUPPORTED;
>> + }
>> + else if (Instance->NetworkInterface->NetworkProtocolType ==
>> ProtocolTypeTcp6 && Data->HostIpAddressFormat !=
>> REDFISH_HOST_INTERFACE_HOST_IP_ADDRESS_FORMAT_IP6) { // IPv6 case
>> + DEBUG((DEBUG_ERROR, "%a: Network Interface is IPv6, but Host
>> Interface requires IPv4\n"));
>
> Missed argument for %a format
> Missed space "DEBUG (("
>
> Igor: Inattentiveness. Thank you.
>
>> + return EFI_UNSUPPORTED;
>> + }
>> //
>> // Check if we can reach out Redfish service using this network
>> interface.
>> // Check with MAC address using Device Descriptor Data Device Type 04
>> and Type 05.
>> @@ -1102,6 +1153,7 @@ RedfishServiceGetNetworkInterface (
>> OUT EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE **NetworkIntfInstances
>> )
>> {
>> + EFI_STATUS Status;
>> EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL *ThisNetworkInterfaceIntn;
>> EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE *ThisNetworkInterface;
>> EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_REST_EX_INSTANCE_INTERNAL *RestExInstance;
>> @@ -1141,6 +1193,16 @@ RedfishServiceGetNetworkInterface (
>>
>> ThisNetworkInterfaceIntn =
>> (EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL *)GetFirstNode
>> (&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface);
>> while (TRUE) {
>> + // If Get Subnet Info skip this interface
>> + Status = NetworkInterfaceGetSubnetInfo (ThisNetworkInterfaceIntn,
>> ImageHandle); // Get subnet info
>> + if (EFI_ERROR(Status)) {
>> + if (IsNodeAtEnd (&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface,
>> &ThisNetworkInterfaceIntn->Entry)) {
>> + break;
>> + }
>> + ThisNetworkInterfaceIntn =
>> (EFI_REDFISH_DISCOVER_NETWORK_INTERFACE_INTERNAL *)GetNextNode
>> (&mEfiRedfishDiscoverNetworkInterface, &ThisNetworkInterfaceIntn->Entry);
>> + continue;
>> + }
>> +
>> ThisNetworkInterface->IsIpv6 = FALSE;
>> if (CheckIsIpVersion6 (ThisNetworkInterfaceIntn)) {
>> ThisNetworkInterface->IsIpv6 = TRUE;
>> @@ -1260,7 +1322,12 @@ RedfishServiceAcquireService (
>> // Get subnet information in case subnet information is not set because
>> // RedfishServiceGetNetworkInterfaces hasn't been called yet.
>> //
>> - NetworkInterfaceGetSubnetInfo (TargetNetworkInterfaceInternal,
>> ImageHandle);
>> + Status1 = NetworkInterfaceGetSubnetInfo
>> (TargetNetworkInterfaceInternal, ImageHandle);
>> + if (EFI_ERROR(Status1)) {
>> + DEBUG ((DEBUG_ERROR, "%a: Get subnet information fail.\n",
>> __func__));
>> + FreePool(Instance);
>> + continue;
>> + }
>> NewInstance = TRUE;
>> }
>>
>> @@ -1535,7 +1602,7 @@ TestForRequiredProtocols (
>> UINT32 *Id;
>> UINTN Index;
>> EFI_STATUS Status;
>> - UINTN ListCount;
>> + UINTN ListCount, SuccessfulCount = 0;
>>
>> ListCount = (sizeof (gRequiredProtocol) / sizeof
>> (REDFISH_DISCOVER_REQUIRED_PROTOCOL));
>> for (Index = 0; Index < ListCount; Index++) {
>> @@ -1557,13 +1624,14 @@ TestForRequiredProtocols (
>> EFI_OPEN_PROTOCOL_GET_PROTOCOL
>> );
>> if (EFI_ERROR (Status)) {
>> - if (Index == ListCount - 1) {
>> - DEBUG ((DEBUG_INFO, "%a: all required protocols are found on this
>> controller handle: %p.\n", __func__, ControllerHandle));
>> - return EFI_SUCCESS;
>> - }
>> + SuccessfulCount++;
>> }
> It may be SuccessfulCount must have one indentation less, i.e in scope
> of upper "if (!EFI_ERROR (Status)) {", not in scope of "if (EFI_ERROR
> (Status)) {" in context.
>
> Igor: We need TestForRequiredProtocols return SUCCESS when all protocols
> listed in gRequiredProtocol installed.
> When this happened the BuildupNetworkInterface function would be called, and
> we iterate through gRequiredProtocol array and build network interfaces.
> We also install DiscoveredProtocolGuid to prevent BuildupNetworkInterface to
> be called after that.
> If we have SuccessfulCount in scope of upper "if (!EFI_ERROR (Status)) {",
> then BuildupNetworkInterface will be called if something installed on that
> ControllerHandle, like DNS protocol, for example.
Yes, I understand this... but it's still illogical, taking in account variable
name. I mean if (EFI_ERROR (Status)) {SuccessfulCount++};
Here we increase SuccessfulCount for the case "Cond1 && !Cond2", and return
EFI_SUCCESS only if it is true for all gRequiredProtocol entries, i.e 3 times.
Wouldn't it be better to rewrite this code to smth like the following:
{
UINT32 *Id;
UINTN Index;
EFI_STATUS Status;
for (Index = 0; Index < ARRAY_SIZE (gRequiredProtocol); Index++) {
Status = gBS->OpenProtocol (
ControllerHandle,
gRequiredProtocol[Index].RequiredServiceBindingProtocolGuid,
NULL,
This->DriverBindingHandle,
ControllerHandle,
EFI_OPEN_PROTOCOL_TEST_PROTOCOL
);
if (EFI_ERROR (Status)) {
return EFI_UNSUPPORTED;
}
Status = gBS->OpenProtocol (
ControllerHandle,
gRequiredProtocol[Index].DiscoveredProtocolGuid,
(VOID **)&Id,
This->DriverBindingHandle,
ControllerHandle,
EFI_OPEN_PROTOCOL_GET_PROTOCOL
);
if (!EFI_ERROR (Status)) {
// Already installed
return EFI_UNSUPPORTED;
}
}
DEBUG ((DEBUG_MANAGEABILITY, "%a: all required protocols are found on this
controller handle: %p.\n", __func__, ControllerHandle));
return EFI_SUCCESS;
}
?
No unnecessary variables, less indentation + this function is called from
RedfishDiscoverDriverBindingSupported(), i.e very often, so we just reduce
number of useless loop iterations and OpenProtocol() calls.
Regards,
Mike.
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