On Thu, May 9, 2013 at 2:56 PM, Donald Whytock <dwhyt...@gmail.com> wrote: > On Thu, May 9, 2013 at 2:20 PM, Rob Weir <robw...@apache.org> wrote: > >> The above steps could take a week, or if you have any comments in the >> current draft, best to send them along via email. > > > Kevin Grignon's paragraph: > "submissions where enhanced" -> "submissions were enhanced", though this is > from a designer's quote > > Michael Acevedo's paragraph: > "and find ways to improve" -> "and finding ways to improve" > or > "and ways to improve" > or > "and how to improve" > > Suggestion: > "design is from Robin Fowler, takes" -> "design from Robin Fowler takes" >
Thanks. I made those changes. -Rob > Don --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org
