How about something along this 'Upgrade to Open business freedom.'

viktor
-----Original Message-----
From: "Graham Lauder" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: [email protected]
Sent: 12/14/2007 16:19
Subject: Re: [Marketing] Re: Website Upgrade Marketing Input

On Saturday 15 December 2007 08:46:01 viktor wrote:
> How about 'Freedom from the ordinary.'
>

I like that, but I'm not sure that it would work in this case.

For this application, given the target market, It needs to answer a number of 
questions about OOo:

What is it
What does it do
Why should I download it 
What's in it for me

And all that in eight words or less.  :)

The other option is the three line catch phrase

The usual form is:  Question Answer Kicker

For example:

So you need a Office software upgrade?
Download OpenOffice.org
The Best TCO in business Software     

Not sure how that would work on our splash page though.  Probably a bit on the 
long side.


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