On Sun, 2006-04-30 at 11:04 +0100, John McCreesh wrote: > On Sun, 2006-04-30 at 01:38 +0200, Bernhard Dippold wrote: > > Hi, > > > > as nobody replies on [EMAIL PROTECTED] I show the seemingly more > > interested people here, what I did from your comments. I included a > > fourth draft in the website linked below. > > +1 for the third draft
Few minor things. Bullets should start with capitals since the sentence leading to them end in a full stop. Text needs more variation to make key messages stand out. Larger font for some text rather than just bold - eg Is your software legal? The Business Software Alliance is setting up schemes to prosecute offenders there is a completely legal and free alternative -- Ian Lynch www.theINGOTs.org www.opendocumentfellowship.org www.schoolforge.org.uk --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
