Adam, Hi, I'm new to the list, but I thought I'd try to share some thoughts.
I'm thinking about a couple of potential changes in wording. They all revolve around making a slightly stronger comparison between the "openness" of OpenOffice.org <http://OpenOffice.org> and the current level of "openness" experienced by the person(s) seeing the poster. First, how about changing the last sentence to "Is Yours?" or "Shouldn't Yours Be?" or "Shouldn't Theirs Be?" The last one focuses on the kids in the picture. Second, what about changing BOTH sentences to "Our world is Open." and "Is Yours?" or any of the other suggestions from above. The idea is to position OpenOffice.org <http://OpenOffice.org> as an optimal/near-optimal state and then ask the reader if THEIR state (or the state of the kids in that picture) is as close to optimal as the reader would like it to be. Personally, I think education in general and SPECIFICALLY the education of young kids should be as open as possible. Hope that helps. On 5/28/05, Adam Moore <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > I have attached a poster to an issue that I have created. I would > > > -- > Adam Moore > Community Volunteer > OOo blog: AdamMooreOOo.blogspot.com <http://AdamMooreOOo.blogspot.com> > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > For additional commands, e-mail: [EMAIL PROTECTED] > >
