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Evan Zacks commented on KAFKA-1275:
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Thanks, Jay.

There were a few inconsistencies in the command samples around whether 
bold-face text was used for the prompt indicator at the start of each line, 
those were addressed in my patch but not applied, but not a big deal.

Another minor change that wasn't applied was to make the reference to 
"messages" (plural) consistent in the sample commands of Section 1.3 / Step 6: 
Setting up a multi-broker cluster: "Let's publish a few messages to our new 
topic", followed by output, then "Now consume this message" (should be "Now 
consume these messages").

In the same section, the output for the "Let's publish a few messages..." is in 
bold-face whereas all other command output on the page is not.

There is a typo in the new documentation towards the end of the Section 1.3 /  
Step 6: Setting up a multi-broker cluster section: {{kafka-topics.sh}} is 
misspelled {{kafktopics.sh}} in the second-to-last command.

Hope this helps.

> fixes for quickstart documentation
> ----------------------------------
>
>                 Key: KAFKA-1275
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/KAFKA-1275
>             Project: Kafka
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: website
>    Affects Versions: 0.8.1
>            Reporter: Evan Zacks
>            Assignee: Jay Kreps
>            Priority: Minor
>              Labels: documentation
>             Fix For: 0.8.1
>
>         Attachments: KAFKA-1275-quickstart-doc.patch
>
>
> The quickstart guide refers to commands that no longer exist in the master 
> git branch per changes in KAFKA-554.
> If changes for the documentation to match 0.8.1 are already in development 
> elsewhere, please feel free to discard this issue.



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