Thanks you Shane, these are good improvements.

We might want to rephrase "SQL-like language called HiveQL" since many
consider it a bona fide SQL language, not just SQL-like.  And I have some
editorial quibbles, starting with a proper trademark symbol on the title
line.

How about opening a Hive JIRA issue for this?  Then we could discuss and
review as usual.

-- Lefty


On Tue, Mar 29, 2016 at 8:06 AM, Shane Curcuru <curc...@apache.org> wrote:

> Clone URL (Committers only):
>
> https://cms.apache.org/redirect?new=curcuru;action=diff;uri=http://hive.apache.org/index.mdtext
>
> For your consideration, a patch adding some useful starter links to the
> Hive homepage.
>
> - Shane
>  ASF INFRA-11545
>
> Index: trunk/content/index.mdtext
> ===================================================================
> --- trunk/content/index.mdtext  (revision 1737009)
> +++ trunk/content/index.mdtext  (working copy)
> @@ -1,18 +1,23 @@
>  Title: Apache Hive TM
>
> -The Apache Hive &trade; data warehouse software facilitates querying and
> managing large datasets residing in distributed storage. Hive provides a
> mechanism to project structure onto this data and query the data using a
> SQL-like language called HiveQL. At the same time this language also allows
> traditional map/reduce programmers to plug in their custom mappers and
> reducers when it is inconvenient or inefficient to express this logic in
> HiveQL.
> +The Apache Hive &trade; data warehouse software facilitates querying and
> managing large datasets residing in distributed storage. Hive provides a
> mechanism to project structure onto this data and query the data using a
> SQL-like language called HiveQL. The HiveQL language also allows
> traditional map/reduce programmers simple extensions for plugging in custom
> mappers and reducers when it is inconvenient or inefficient to express this
> logic in HiveQL.
>
> -## Getting Started
> +## Getting Started With Apache Hive Software
>
> -Check out the [Getting Started Guide][GETTING_STARTED] on the [Hive
> wiki][HIVE_WIKI].
> + * Check out the [Getting Started Guide][GETTING_STARTED] on the [Hive
> wiki][HIVE_WIKI].
> + * Learn more [About Hive's Functionality][HIVE_DETAILS] on [our
> wiki][HIVE_WIKI]
> + * Read the [Getting Started Guide][GETTING_STARTED] to learn how to
> install Hive
> + * The [User and Hive QL documentation][HIVE_QL] shows how to program Hive
>
> -## Getting Involved
> +## Getting Involved With The Apache Hive Community
>
> -Hive is an open source volunteer project under the Apache Software
> Foundation. Previously it was a subproject of [Apache
> Hadoop][APACHE_HADOOP], but has now graduated to become a top-level project
> of its own. We encourage you to learn about the project and contribute your
> expertise. Here are some starter links:
> +Apache Hive is an open source project run by volunteers at the Apache
> Software Foundation. Previously it was a subproject of [Apache&reg;
> Hadoop&reg;][APACHE_HADOOP], but has now graduated to become a top-level
> project of its own. We encourage you to learn about the project and
> contribute your expertise.
>
> -  * Give us [feedback][ISSUE_TRACKING]: What can we do better?
> -  * Join the [mailing list][MAILING_LISTS]: Meet the community.
> -  * Become a [Hive Fan on Facebook][HIVE_FACEBOOK].
> + * Give us [feedback or submit bug reports][ISSUE_TRACKING]: What can we
> do better?
> + * Join the [mailing list][MAILING_LISTS] and meet our
> [community][COMMUNITY]
> + * Read through our [Contributor's Guides][CONTRIBUTOR] about where to
> find the source or submit patches
> + * Become a [Hive Fan on Facebook][HIVE_FACEBOOK]
> + * Follow [@ApacheHive on Twitter][HIVE_TWITTER]
>
>  [GETTING_STARTED]:
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/Hive/GettingStarted
>  [HIVE_WIKI]: https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/Hive
> @@ -20,4 +25,10 @@
>  [ISSUE_TRACKING]: /issue_tracking.html
>  [MAILING_LISTS]: /mailing_lists.html
>  [HIVE_FACEBOOK]: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Hive/43928506208
> +[HIVE_DETAILS]: https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/Hive/Home
> +[HIVE_QL]:
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/Hive/Home#Home-UserDocumentation
> +[COMMUNITY]: http://hive.apache.org/people.html
> +[CONTRIBUTOR]:
> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/Hive/Home#Home-ResourcesforContributors
> +[HIVE_TWITTER]: https://twitter.com/apachehive
>
> +
>
>

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