I don't have edit rights to the Flex wiki, so here are my suggestions:

-- First paragraph needs a closing period (.)

-- Under Membership Data, the first sentence needs a closing period.

-- Under Project Activity, perhaps expand the first sentence to this: "The
website migration off the Apache CMS is still in process."

-- Last sentence needs "are" added between "users" and "left"

Otherwise looks good.

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On Wed, Dec 2, 2020 at 3:38 AM Olaf Krueger <m...@olafkrueger.net> wrote:

> Hi guys,
>
> it's board report time!
>
> The report has to be sent at the very latest until Wed Dec 9th.
>
> This is the draft [1].
> It would be great if somebody could review it.
> Feel free to add or remove whatever makes sense!
>
> Thanks!
>
> Olaf
>
> [1] https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/FLEX/December+2020
>
>
>
> --
> Sent from: http://apache-flex-development.2333347.n4.nabble.com/
>


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