Joel, I sent you a private email offering to do an edit review of the
website. There are a lot of little errors of grammar, capitalization, and
word choice. I work as a freelance editor but I am offering this for free
as my contribution to your estimable project.

a

On Fri, May 19, 2017 at 1:53 PM, Nemi <nemino...@gmail.com> wrote:

> On your website, "Latest Version" button is not working, or it is not a
> button? It is confusing.
> If it is not a button, make it not look like button near by.
> If it is a button, why don't you link it to latest win or mac, like links
> below?
> <http://apache-flex-development.2333347.n4.nabble.
> com/file/n61693/screenshot_b538edafe7d04ff788a46901fe5a1e9b.png>
>
> Also, grammar thing, but it matters, why uppercase for "... Version", "...
> Notes", "... Download" ?
> English and German are not my native language, but as far as I know, only
> in
> German language one writes nouns always with first letter uppercase
> (capitalization).
>
>
>
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> tp61632p61693.html
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>



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