Hi,

Looks good - more minor mods required.

- "consist of a software development kit" should be "consisting of a"....  If I 
was being really picky I would talk about automated testing tools as they are 
not actually part of the release.
- change "The v4.10 release" to "The 4.10.0 release", this occurs in a few 
later palaces as well
- swap the two internationalisation points around ie one about dates after the 
one about multiple languages
- "Round Trip Engineering" shoudl be "Run Time Error"
- Im in 2 minds about 360|stack mention not 100% sure it has it place in this 
press release, sorry John.

+1 to we should mention Linux support.

Thanks,
Justin

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