On 1/9/13 10:37 AM, "Guthmann, Scott" <sguthm...@on3solutions.com> wrote:

>> Scott,
>> It looks good. One edit I would look at is, "The Flex framework allows
>> expressive Web applications to deploy consistently on all major browsers,
>> desktops and devices (including smartphones, tablets and TV). "
>> I don't know if we want to limit the description of what Flex can create to
>> "Web" applications. Maybe "... allows expressive online applications...",
>> "...online and offline applications..."  or remove the word "web" all
>> together.
> 
> I need help here. Is anyone else confused / concerned by the current phrase?
I think you can drop the word "web".

-- 
Alex Harui
Flex SDK Team
Adobe Systems, Inc.
http://blogs.adobe.com/aharui

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