Hi, Rich.

I was afk so was slow to review your pull request. I wanted to suggest some
minor changes, but by the time I submitted my comments the pull request had
happened.

My comments were:

line 7: "The addition of new committers" -- "new" is not necessary
line 17: "inviting a new committer" -- "new" is not necessary
line 34: "committers that" should be "committers who"
line 49: I think "whims" should be "whim"
line 50: "someone that" should be "someone who"
line 74: need a comma after the link and before "which"
lines 77-78: "that a committers" should be either "that a committer" or
"that committers"

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