cottage14 opened a new pull request #76: URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/76
line 25: removed 'both', which was trying to refer to three things. line 36; added a comma to make a list of adjectives easier to read line 73: proposed slight text change for smoother reading line 75: removed unneeded comma line 80: adjusted phrasing to improve flow line 77: adjusted phrasing for better flow line 84: corrected "Hangout" to "Hangouts"; added the Slack channel option line 86: fixed run-on sentence line 87: changed "he/she" to "they", which is pretty well accepted now and includes people who do not use binary pronouns line 88: inserted missing "add to" -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@community.apache.org For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@community.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@community.apache.org
