cottage14 opened a new pull request #72: URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/72
Some minor text-change proposals. line 33 “each project community may have different ways” => “each project community may have its own ways” 43 “...is governed by a Board of directors, elected by our Membership...” => “...is governed by a Board of Directors elected by our Membership...” The comma is unnecessary. 44 “...support to Apache in other ways.” => “...support of Apache.” current text raises the question “other ways than what?” 61: “the ASF’s structure and organization and more.” => “and the ASF’s structure and organization.” If a list starts with “such as” it does not need “and more” at the end. 75: “...promoting the diversity and inclusion Apache Software Foundation communities.” => “...promoting diversity and inclusion in Apache Software Foundation communities.” missing ‘in’ 86: “...called an ‘ALC Chapter’.” => “...called ‘ALC Chapters’.” mismatched singular and plural. 94: “How To Ask Questions” => “How to ask questions” to titles in the rest of the document -- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@community.apache.org For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@community.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@community.apache.org
