swapnilmmane commented on a change in pull request #55:
URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/55#discussion_r654164865
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File path: source/gettingStarted/101.md
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@@ -13,19 +13,19 @@ The key to working on projects at Apache (and on any open
source project, for th
is to have a personal reason for being involved. You might be trying to solve
a day job issue, you might be looking to learn a new technology or you might
simply want to do something fun in your free time. We don't care what your
-motivation is we just care about you wanting to get involved.
+motivation is; we just care about you wanting to get involved.
-If you don't have a specific technical issue to solve you might be willing to
+If you don't have a specific technical issue to solve, you might be willing to
work on any project. Our [projects page][1] provides a useful index which
-allows you to view projects alphabetically, by category or by coding language.
When you view a projects detail page in this list you will find information
about their
+allows you to view projects alphabetically, by category or by coding language.
When you view a project's details page in this list you will find information
about their
mailing lists, issue tracker and other resources.
You might also like to view our
[Incubating projects][2]. These projects work in exactly the same way as our
"top
level projects" but are still developing their initial community.
-Once you've found some interesting-looking projects, join their mailing lists
and
-start "lurking". Read the mails that come through the list. Initially you will
not
+Once you've found some interesting-looking projects, join their email lists and
Review comment:
+1, will be good to use the `mailing lists` term to maintain the
consistency.
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File path: source/gettingStarted/101.md
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@@ -13,19 +13,19 @@ The key to working on projects at Apache (and on any open
source project, for th
is to have a personal reason for being involved. You might be trying to solve
a day job issue, you might be looking to learn a new technology or you might
simply want to do something fun in your free time. We don't care what your
-motivation is we just care about you wanting to get involved.
+motivation is; we just care about you wanting to get involved.
-If you don't have a specific technical issue to solve you might be willing to
+If you don't have a specific technical issue to solve, you might be willing to
work on any project. Our [projects page][1] provides a useful index which
-allows you to view projects alphabetically, by category or by coding language.
When you view a projects detail page in this list you will find information
about their
+allows you to view projects alphabetically, by category or by coding language.
When you view a project's details page in this list you will find information
about their
mailing lists, issue tracker and other resources.
You might also like to view our
[Incubating projects][2]. These projects work in exactly the same way as our
"top
level projects" but are still developing their initial community.
-Once you've found some interesting-looking projects, join their mailing lists
and
-start "lurking". Read the mails that come through the list. Initially you will
not
+Once you've found some interesting-looking projects, join their email lists and
Review comment:
+1, it will be good to use the `mailing lists` term to maintain
consistency.
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