adityasharma7 commented on a change in pull request #38:
URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/38#discussion_r539839380
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File path: source/projectIndependence.md
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title: Project Independence
---
-While not all aspects of the Apache Way are practiced the same way by
-all projects at the ASF, there are a number of rules and policies that Apache
-projects are required to follow – things like complying with PMC
+While not all ASF projects practice all aspects of the Apache Way in the same
way, there are a number of rules and policies that Apache
+projects must follow – things like complying with PMC
[release voting][1], [legal policy][2], [brand policy][3],
using [mailing lists][4], etc., which are [documented in various places][5].
A community is not merely a set of rules; it is also a set of behaviors
-that are expressed by the participants when interacting within that
+that the participants express when interacting within that
community. While the ASF is happy to host
many different styles of project communities, there are some core behaviors
that
-are expected and required of any Apache project.
+we expect and requir of any Apache project.
Review comment:
```suggestion
we expect and require of any Apache project.
```
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