cottage14 opened a new pull request #25: URL: https://github.com/apache/comdev-site/pull/25
Proposed edits to improve readability. Passive voice can obscure who does what, and people whose primary language is not English can find it hard to understand. ---------------------------------------------------------------- This is an automated message from the Apache Git Service. To respond to the message, please log on to GitHub and use the URL above to go to the specific comment. For queries about this service, please contact Infrastructure at: us...@infra.apache.org --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@community.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@community.apache.org
