On Wed, Jun 30, 2010 at 11:21 PM, Xun Long Gui <ustbco...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Rahul, > Thank you for your carefully reiview of the website content. > > Yes, if you want to edit homepage content, just do it, it is ok, this > is our project. > <snip/>
Great, will do so when I get a chance. -Rahul > And also, i will fix these problems follow your instruction. > > -Gui Xun Long > > On 7/1/10, Rahul Akolkar <rahul.akol...@gmail.com> wrote: >> Long, >> >> Thanks for updating the [scxml-eclipse] site with the user guide, its >> looks great and is certainly more accessible than before. >> >> Some feedback: >> >> * Do you mind if I make some changes to the second paragraph of the >> home page [1]? I want to correct a couple of typos and its also too >> conversational for my taste. Such a style may work very well for the >> guide and other places, but I think for the home page intro we want >> something slightly more "formal". >> >> * The 5 min intro to SCXML [2] should simply link to the Commons >> SCXML page [3] rather than having the same page here for two reasons: >> (a) avoid duplication of content, harder to maintain; and (b) broken >> links, such as "custom actions" at the very end. So, the guide can say >> something like "for a 5 min intro, go to this other site ..." >> >> * Remove the "Coming soon ..." sections on the guide page [4]. We >> don't anticipate APIs in the programming sense being important at the >> user level for such tooling. We can add other sections when they >> become available. >> >> * At the bottom of the guide pages, the contact is your personal >> address. In general, we want discussions on the mailing list (so all >> project discussions can be followed and archived etc.), so I suggest >> changing to something like "... any questions or suggestions, please >> send to the Commons user or dev mailing list as appropriate." (and >> perhaps link to the mailing list page). Bit of an aside, at Commons, >> we do list project members on the "Team" page. >> >> -Rahul >> >> [1] http://commons.apache.org/sandbox/gsoc/2010/scxml-eclipse/index.html >> [2] >> http://commons.apache.org/sandbox/gsoc/2010/scxml-eclipse/guide/scxml-documents.html >> [3] http://commons.apache.org/scxml/guide/scxml-documents.html >> [4] http://commons.apache.org/sandbox/gsoc/2010/scxml-eclipse/guide.html >> > > -- > Best Regards > > Gui Xun Long (桂训龙) > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@commons.apache.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@commons.apache.org
