Hi Jayapal, I have incorporated your comments, and the updated doc is posted at https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK-2685.
Thanks -Radhika From: Jayapal Reddy Uradi Sent: Wednesday, August 07, 2013 11:15 AM To: Radhika Puthiyetath Subject: Re: [Doc] Egress Firewall Rules for Review Hi Radhika, Here are my review comments. Let me know if you need any clarifications. 1. Highlight the egress default configurable option using the network offering. Comment1: By default, the egress traffic is blocked Jay: By default egress traffic is blocked in default network offerings. comment2: Remove destination protocol, put the word protocol Allow the egress traffic with protocol TCP,UDP,ICMP, or ALL. We don't call destination protocol or source protocol :). There is only one protocol with source/destination ports comment3: change the case of allow/block to upper. comment4: Highlight the default policy is allow for new offerings. Thanks, Jayapal On 07-Aug-2013, at 10:34 AM, Radhika Puthiyetath <radhika.puthiyet...@citrix.com<mailto:radhika.puthiyet...@citrix.com>> wrote: -----Original Message----- From: Radhika Puthiyetath [mailto:radhika.puthiyet...@citrix.com<http://citrix.com>] Sent: Friday, August 02, 2013 5:41 PM To: us...@cloudstack.apache.org<mailto:us...@cloudstack.apache.org>; dev@cloudstack.apache.org<mailto:dev@cloudstack.apache.org>; Jayapal Reddy Uradi; Angeline Shen Subject: [Doc] Egress Firewall Rules for Review Hi, Egress Firewall Rules documentation is ready for review. The doc is attached at https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK-2685 Please see 15.22.2. Egress Firewall Rules in Advanced Zone(165), and provide your feedback. Regards -Radhika
