Hi Radhika,

Thank you for your work! Some comments:

<quote>
For other Catalyst PVLAN support switch, connect the switch to upper switch
by using cables. The number of cables should be greater than the number of
PVLANs used.
</quote>

This is a little confusion. Should be "by using multiple cables, which one
cable for each PVLAN pair". And the last sentence is not necessary.

<quote>
OVS on XenServer and KVM does not support PVLAN. Therefore, simulate PVLAN
on OVS
for XenServer and KVM by modifying the flow table and tagging every traffic
leaving guest VMs
with the secondary VLAN ID.
</quote>

I think the following description is more clear:

"OVS on XenServer and KVM does not support PVLAN natively. Therefore,
CloudStack managed to simulate PVLAN on OVS
for XenServer and KVM by modifying the flow table."

--Sheng


On Fri, Aug 2, 2013 at 5:18 AM, Radhika Puthiyetath <
radhika.puthiyet...@citrix.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> PVLAN  documentation is ready for review. The doc is attached at
> https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/CLOUDSTACK-850.
>
> Please see 15.14. Isolation in Advanced Zone Using Private VLAN (141), and
> provide your feedback.
>
> Regards
> -Radhika
>
>
>

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