In an effort to make the website the best place to showcase and explain the 
project, I'd like to revisit some of the text we currently use and suggest some 
revisions.
 
Among my suggestions is simplifying the headline text, adding an explicit "What 
does Aurora do" section, and narrowing the narrowing the set of features we 
highlight into some alternate groupings.
 
Please take a few minutes and add comments to this document: [ 
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U8I_Q5ZEb-9PKe04xjhqfiXAESuGZ7KNndrdAWgAO-Q/edit?usp=sharing
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U8I_Q5ZEb-9PKe04xjhqfiXAESuGZ7KNndrdAWgAO-Q/edit?usp=sharing
 )
 
Thanks,
Dave

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