On Wed, Oct 26, 2016 at 7:25 PM, L. David Baron <dba...@dbaron.org> wrote:
> On Friday 2016-10-21 15:01 -0700, Tantek Çelik wrote:
>> Support revised charter, with requested changes:
>> * Hyperlink the phrase "Community Group" in the charter to the
>> specific Community Group they mean, and perhaps title the hyperlink
>> more specifically as well.
>> * List the Community Group explicitly in the coordination section
>> http://www.w3.org/2011/audio/charter/audio-2016.html#coordination and
>> describe the relationship between the WG and the CG.
>
> So the only community group mention I can see in the charter is to
> say that work that is out of scope for the working group could
> instead occur in a community group (which I think means a
> hypothetical community group).  If that's the case, I don't think
> the second comment makes sense since the intent is that the material
> be out of scope for the working group.  It could be clearer that the
> community group is hypothetical, though.
>
> I'm inclined to submit the comment as:
>> One basically-editorial suggestion:
>>
>> Either:
>>
>> * Hyperlink the phrase "Community Group" in the charter to the
>> specific Community Group intended, and perhaps title the hyperlink
>> more specifically as well.
>>
>> * Or, if no such community group exists, make it clearer that it's
>> a hypothetical community group.
>
> (and record it as a support-with-optional-changes).

Yes, support with optional-changes, and how you've worded it works for me.

Thanks,

Tantek
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