On Mon, Apr 05, 2004 at 10:00:43PM +0200, Andreas Barth wrote: > * Frank Lichtenheld ([EMAIL PROTECTED]) [040402 23:40]: > > Comments welcome (don't take the "DLE" naming too serious :) > > thank you for doing this work.
New version available at the old place: http://people.debian.org/~djpig/www.d.o-licenses/dle-opl.{wml,data,en.html} > Some ideas of me: > - A link to the discussion on debian-legal (as this provides more > in-depth information) Added. > - I guess that you plan to put the usual menu on the left side. Links > from there to the DFSG, the FAQ and the list-archive could be > useful. Don't know what you mean with the "usual menu"? I added a menu at the top of the page similar to that of the ports pages. > - How about putting the most useful information in the first line and > putting it at the largest size available?: > <h1>Open Publication Licenses 1.0 - non-free</h1> > <h2>Debian License Examination 1-1</h2> I oriented the layout to the DSA pages... Not yet sure what to do here. > - Well, the version is the version of the license? Then I'd rather > write it as Open Publication License, Version 1.0. Done. > - "Date issued" is perhaps to strong. What about e.g. "Date published"? Changed. Gruesse, -- Frank Lichtenheld <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> www: http://www.djpig.de/
