On Sun, Aug 10, 2003 at 10:54:27PM +0200, Josip Rodin wrote:
> On Sun, Aug 10, 2003 at 03:33:14PM -0500, Debian Bug Tracking System wrote:
> > > This sentence does not make much sense:
> > > 
> > > Make sure that the To field of your message to the author to has only the
> > > author(s) address(es) in it; put both the person who reported the bug and
> > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] in the CC field.
> > > 
> > > Mostly in the first line, the "to the author to has ..."
> > 
> > I removed the second 'to'. I belive the sentence is now correct (?)
> 
> It lacks an apostrophe to indicate possessive genitive, although I'm not
> sure how to phrase that properly with all the optional (parenthesized)
> cases...

I was going to change it to "the address(es) of the author(s)". Frank
beat me to fixing the actual bug, but I could still make that change.

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Colin Watson                                  [EMAIL PROTECTED]

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