I noted a couple of errors on this page:
http://www.debian.org/events/2002/1009-linuxexpo-report
In 1st para:
add a comma after 'transport of machines, monitors'
In 'the Stand':
Add a comma after "'free as in freedom'", before "free beer"
* Debian-NetBSD should be a new listitem
In 'the talks':
'The Simon Tindel (Sun Executive)'-> 'Simon Tindel (the Sun executive)'
perhaps better to move the guy's name to the first mention of him earlier
in the paragraph.
In 'The show':
'sucess'->'success'
thanx
Wookey
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