On Fri, 11 Jan 2002 08:10:20 -0800, Debian WWW CVS wrote: > english/events : material.wml > Added a pointer to the (new) Debian CD pages and artwork [...]
I don't understand the way you changed this sentence: "If you buy blank CDs in order to do a CDROM giveaway you might want to spend a little more money and burn some CDs, do not forget and try to make them look nicer than a blank CD-ROM disk [...]" "and burn some CDs" in this place doesn't make any sense to me since it imply that otherwise you would give away empty/blank CDs to people, and what's the point in doing that? :-) I suggest this change: "If you buy blank CDs in order to burn some CDs and do a CD-ROM giveaway you might want to spend a little more money to make them look nicer than a blank CD-ROM disk [...]" What do you think? -- Regards, Kaare - <http://www.nightcall.dk/>
