Re: incomplete sentences in events/2004/1018-systems-report

[Jens Seidel]

On Wed, Apr 13, 2005 at 10:59:12AM +0200, Thomas Huriaux wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Thomas Huriaux <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> (09/01/2005):
> > I think there are 2 incomplete sentences in
> > www.debian.org/events/2004/1018-systems-report.en.html :
> > 
> > Can you please fix it ?
> 
> Is there no way to get these two sentences completed?
> (replying to http://lists.debian.org/debian-www/2005/01/msg00096.html)

It's difficult to fix this, since I do not know how many lines are
missing but the following patch (already committed) should make both
sentences at least readable. I hope the content is OK as well (original
text is not part of CVS history).

Index: events/2004/1018-systems-report.wml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/webwml/webwml/english/events/2004/1018-systems-report.wml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.3 1018-systems-report.wml
--- events/2004/1018-systems-report.wml 12 Dec 2004 21:09:39 -0000      1.3
+++ events/2004/1018-systems-report.wml 13 Apr 2005 10:23:59 -0000
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 href="http://people.debian.org/~mbanck/photos/systems2004/p1010068.jpg";>Mac
 SE/30</a>, running Debian stable on a Linux-2.2 kernel. Jens Schmalzing got it
 installed and running over time, so we were finally able to showcase it.
-general-purpose demonstration/information machine, we gladly accepted a
+As a general-purpose demonstration/information machine, we gladly accepted a
 Shuttle XPC box with a pretty big LCD which Shuttle donated to all the free
 projects. Additionally, Michael Banck's ThinkPad was around most of the time.
 While the Mac was of course running text mode (<a
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 
 <p>Jens Schmalzing and Michael Banck went to the expo area on Sunday and
 started building up the booth. However, the Shuttle boxes had not arrived yet,
-so this was pretty much limited to setting up the SE/30. and depositing the
+so this was pretty much limited to setting up the SE/30 and depositing the
 information material in the storage area behind the booth. Systems started for
 real on Monday and Michael was pretty busy setting up our booth a bit more at
 the beginning. Some time later, Robert Lemmen arrived and we started to shift

Thanks,
Jens


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