Jonathan McDowell <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> schrieb: > Package: wnpp > Severity: wishlist > > * Package name : l2tpns > Version : 2.0.5 > Upstream Author : David Parrish and others <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > * URL : http://l2tpns.sf.net/ > * License : GPL > Description : L2TP LNS which does not require l2tpd, pppd or any kernel > patches. > > L2TPNS is half of a complete L2TP implementation. It supports only > the LNS side of the connection. [...]
To my taste, this description contains too many abbreviations, and is only understandable for someone who already knows what they mean. Please follow the general guidelines for descriptions, file:///usr/share/doc/developers-reference/ch-best-pkging-practices.en.html#s-bpp-desc-basics Thanks, Frank -- Frank Küster Inst. f. Biochemie der Univ. Zürich Debian Developer
