On Mon, 2003-10-27 at 13:20, Eduard Bloch wrote: > Description : Free VPN client compatible with Cisco's EasyVPN
s/Free// - this is implied by its placement in Debian. > A VPN client compatible with Cisco's EasyVPN equipment. "vpnc is a ..." - because the long description might not have all the context of the short description, i.e. have the package name right there. > Supports IPSec > with Xauth, 3DES, MD5, PFS, SHA1 and IP tunneling. "It supports ..." This sentence is sort of scattered. I see encryption, authentication, hashing and methods of establishing connections. You might want to split each out and say a bit more about each. > It runs entirely in userspace and uses the TUN/TAP driver for access. s/and/but/, perhaps? -- Joe Drew <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> My weblog doesn't detail my personal life: http://me.woot.net
