Joe Drew <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes: > Johannes Rohr wrote: >> Description : A Client for the one-diskette router `fli4l', using Gtk-2 > > "client for the one-diskette router fli4l"
Right, thanks. But shouldn't the first word be capitalized? >> GTK-Imonc is a graphical client for FLI4L, a popular one-diskette >> Linux-based router for small networks that offers many advanced >> features (see http://www.fli4l.de/). Gtk-Imonc connects to the >> imond server (the controlling daemon) on the router. It uses >> Gtk-2.0 and integrates well into the Gnome desktop. (Seperate >> clients for KDE and WindowMaker also exist) > > I think you can change the last sentence to "It integrates well into > the GNOME desktop (separate clients which integrate well into KDE > and WindowMaker also exist)." You mean GNOME has to be all upper case? > Are those other clients packaged? Unoffical debs exist. None of them is in Debian yet. > Maybe mention them by name. Maybe. But since they are not in Debian (and I don't intend to package KDE software since I don't use KDE myself), I'd rather give an URL where a listing of those clients can be found. >> It displays: >> * online status / traffic info >> * router status >> * calls and connections when logging is activated on the router >> You can control: >> * dialing >> * system shutdown >> * different circuits (LCR) >> * channel bundling >> * hup-timeout of ipppd devices > > Paragraph form might be a good idea for these. Probably. Thanks for the feedback, Johannes -- ~/.signature under construction
