Package: diskless
Version: 0.3.18.0.5
Severity: wishlist
Tags: l10n, patch
While translating the debconf file diskless_0.3.18.0.5, I encountered
the following typos, which I thought you might like to eliminate in a
future release.
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1.
po:5
auto: ⑤ Type: string
auto: ⑤ Description
reference: ⑤ ../diskless-image-secure.templates:12 ../diskless-image-
simple.templates:12
Original: ⌘0
This specifies the address of the central NFS server where to mount
partitions from on the clients. It is recommended that this contain
the IP
address, although this is not required.
(I suggest:
"This specifies the address of the central NFS server on which
clients will mount partitions"
or
"This specifies the address of the central NFS server on which will
be mounted partitions from clients"
also
"Including the IP address is recommended, but not required."
This is fairly complex English, so please don't feel bad about it. ;) )
2.
po:9
auto: ⑤ Type: string
auto: ⑤ Description
reference: ⑤ ../diskless-image-secure.templates:27 ../diskless-image-
simple.templates:27
Original: ⌘0
This option specifies the path which will be used by the clients to
their
private read-write directories. The IP address will be appended to
the end
of this path.
(to access their private read-write directories?)
3.
po:11
auto: ⑤ Type: string
auto: ⑤ Description
reference: ⑤ ../diskless-image-secure.templates:35 ../diskless-image-
simple.templates:35
Original: ⌘0
This specifies where /home on the clients should be mounted from your
NFS
server. Examples are /home, /tftpboot/home, etc.
(You don't use "for example" or "e.g." with "etc." One or the other,
not both. ;)
With "e.g." or "for example", you're saying "here are a few
possibilities".
With "etc.", you're saying "and the rest".
Thus you're saying in this string, "Here are a few possible home
directories, and the rest." It doesn't fit. So you can say:
"For example, /home, /tftpboot/home."
or
"( /home, /tftpboot/home etc.)"
;)
4.
You have a pair of duplicate strings, bar the capital D in Debian.
You may want to remove one. ;)
.po:3
auto: ⑤ Type: string
auto: ⑤ Description
reference: ⑤ ../diskless-image-secure.templates:4
Original: ⌘0
This option specifies the default name for the master host. This is
required
to be setup by some debian packages. It should have an entry in the DNS.
po:22
auto: ⑤ Type: string
auto: ⑤ Description
reference: ⑤ ../diskless-image-simple.templates:4
Original: ⌘0
This option specifies the default name for the master host. This is
required
to be setup by some Debian packages. It should have an entry in the DNS.
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