On Sat, 2016-11-26 at 03:34 +0000, Johannes Schauer wrote: > + None of the required targets must attempt to write outside of the
You either mean "The required targets must not attempt" or "None of the required targets may attempt"; the current wording means "None of the required targets is required to attempt". Based on confusion I've seen before from non-native speakers regarding the use of "may" in such constructions (despite being perfectly reasonable English), I'd suggest the former wording. > + source package package directory tree. An exception to this rule is > + the use of <file>/tmp</file> which is permitted as long as temporary > + files are deleted and not re-used by subsequent execution of the > + target. This is to prevent that source package builds create and > + depend on state from the outside and thus affect multiple > independent "This restriction is intended to prevent source package builds creating or depending on state outside of themselves and thus ..."? > + rebuilds. Most notably, none of the required targets must attempt to > + write into <file>$HOME</file>. This wants re-wording similarly to the first sentence. Regards, Adam
