Hi Paul, thank for your patience. I think that the patch you sent nicely enhances the chapter 5.13.
On the typograhy side, it is very minor, but since you added a bullet point to the list in 5.13.2, you can make the now previous bullet point finish by a semicolon (see below), and the last bullet point finishing by a dot. Have a nice day, -- Charles Le Wed, Jul 04, 2012 at 10:16:21PM +0200, Paul Gevers a écrit : > Index: pkgs.dbk > =================================================================== > --- pkgs.dbk (revision 9236) > +++ pkgs.dbk (working copy) > @@ -2386,9 +2386,7 @@ > The package must have been available in <literal>unstable</literal> for 2, 5 > or 10 days, depending on the urgency (high, medium or low). Please note that > the urgency is sticky, meaning that the highest urgency uploaded since the > -previous <literal>testing</literal> transition is taken into account. Those > -delays may be doubled during a freeze, or <literal>testing</literal> > -transitions may be switched off altogether; > +previous <literal>testing</literal> transition is taken into account; > </para> > </listitem> > <listitem> > @@ -2419,6 +2417,12 @@ > all the necessary criteria). ^ > </para> > </listitem> > +<listitem> > +<para> > +The phase of the project. I.e. automatic transitions are turned off during > +the <literal>freeze</literal> of the <literal>testing</literal> distribution; ^ > +</para> > +</listitem> > </itemizedlist> > <para> > To find out whether a package is progressing into <literal>testing</literal> > @@ -2628,10 +2632,11 @@ > The packages are looked at to determine whether they are valid candidates. > This gives the update excuses. The most common reasons why a package is not > considered are too young, RC-bugginess, and out of date on some arches. For > -this part of britney, the release managers have hammers of various sizes to > -force britney to consider a package. (Also, the base freeze is coded in that > -part of britney.) (There is a similar thing for binary-only updates, but this > -is not described here. If you're interested in that, please peruse the > code.) > +this part of britney, the release managers have hammers of various sizes, > +called hints (see below), to force britney to consider a package. (Also, the > +base freeze is coded in that part of britney.) (There is a similar thing for > +binary-only updates, but this is not described here. If you're interested in > +that, please peruse the code.) > </para> > <para> > Now, the more complex part happens: Britney tries to update > <literal>testing</literal> > @@ -2649,7 +2654,13 @@ > </para> > <para> > The hints are available via <ulink > -url="http://&ftp-master-host;/testing/hints/"></ulink>. > +url="http://&ftp-master-host;/testing/hints/"></ulink>, where you can find > +the > +<ulink > url="http://&ftp-master-host;/testing/hints/README">description</ulink> > +as well. With the hints, the Debian Release team can block or unblock > +packages, ease or force packages into <literal>testing</literal>, remove > +packages from <literal>testing</literal>, approve uploads to > +<link linkend="t-p-u">testing-proposed-updates</link> or override the > urgency. > </para> > </section> > -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-policy-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: http://lists.debian.org/20120704235853.gb31...@falafel.plessy.net