On Fri, 30 May 2014, Jakub Wilk wrote: > >+Description: tool to test kernel stability > > I think s/to test/for testing/ sounds better. > > >- them. Used to test kernel stability. > >+ them. It is used to test kernel's stability. > > I don't think this use of 's is correct. > As a data point, according to Google, “kernel stability” is 40 times more > popular than “kernel's stability”.
Either way is fine; "kernel's stability" maybe a bit anthropomorphic, but it's really a minor point.[1] But there really isn't any improvement in going from "Used to test kernel stability" to "It is used to test [the] kernel's stability"; it's just more verbose. 1: This can be deparsed into the "stability of the kernel"; in this case the 's makes "kernel" possessive. Some people may argue that this is bad style, but it's not really worth worrying about, IMO. -- Don Armstrong http://www.donarmstrong.com We have to face the fact that either all of us are going to die together or we are going to learn to live together and if we are to live together we have to talk. -- Eleanor Roosevelt -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-mentors-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: https://lists.debian.org/20140530011014.gq9...@teltox.donarmstrong.com
