Hi , On Sat, 16 Apr 2005 12:40:19 +0900 Junichi Uekawa <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Hi,
> My comments against your description:
>
> Description: Ridiculously tiny window manager
> TinyWM is a ridiculously tiny window manager implemented
> in nearly as few lines of C as possible, without being
> obfuscated or entirely useless. It allows you to move,
> resize, focus (sloppy), and raise windows -- that's it!
> TinyWM's main purpose is to serve as a quick example of some
> window manager programming basics.
> And this is likely to be able to use it as a window manager of a
> embedded system.
>
>
> 1, I would not want to have a relative term like 'ridiculously'
> 2, the first line is just a repetition
> 3, the source code is not what the user will directly see.
>
>
> I suggest the following
> Description: Tiny Window Manager
> TinyWM is a small and simple window manager with small
> memory footprint, useful in embedded systems.
> .
> Features window move, resize, sloppy focus and raise.
> .
> Due to the simplicity, the source code in C and python
> can be used for reference in Window Manager programming basics.
>
>
>
> Could l10n-english folks proofread my description?
>
>
Thank you for this comment .
I thought that word "ridiculously" was undesirable too.
I will adopt Description which you suggested.
>
> BTW, I was really surprised that it was really so small.
> $ wc -l tinywm.c
> 58 tinywm.c
>
I also think so .
regards,
Iwamatsu
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