Hi Santiago, On Montag, 8. Februar 2016, Santiago Ruano Rincón wrote: > I've committed to > https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/publicity/announcements.git/ the first > draft for the announcement about the Squeeze LTS EOF. Please, take a look > on it.
thanks for your work on this! I've attached some patches (#1+#2) fixing minor wording and grammar issues. Then I think we should not miss the opportunity to ask for more funding for the LTS effort, so I'd suggest adding a paragraph linking to https://wiki.debian.org/LTS/Funding - patch (#3) for that attached. There's one irritation though, which I could not fix yet: if support for Squeeze LTS ends now or on the last day of February, and support for Wheezy will be taken over from the security team on April 26th, what will the LTS team do in the maintime? It reads as if the LTS team would do nothing til then. > I haven't proposed a release date yet. Next Sunday, 14th February should > be Ok? I'd be more in favor of February 29th, patch (#4) attached. cheers, Holger
From 75c007cd0e6766749bbb08657e75d3119869b5fb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Levsen <hol...@layer-acht.org> Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 14:36:35 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] remove one 'also', add comma --- en/2016/201602XX.wml | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/2016/201602XX.wml b/en/2016/201602XX.wml index 84c8ff2..07076ba 100644 --- a/en/2016/201602XX.wml +++ b/en/2016/201602XX.wml @@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ release on February 6, 2011.</p> <p>There will be no further security support for Debian 6.0.</p> -<p>The LTS Team will now focus on Debian 7 (<q>wheezy</q>) which is the -current oldstable release. The LTS team will also take over support from the +<p>The LTS Team will now focus on Debian 7 (<q>wheezy</q>), which is the +current oldstable release. The LTS team will take over support from the Security Team on April 26, 2016.</p> <p>Debian 7 will also receive Long Term Support for five years after its -- 1.9.1
From f4a2166d6f370acc452e4f9fd42e70edbd438cf6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Levsen <hol...@layer-acht.org> Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 14:41:17 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] improve structure, thank sponsors more explicitly --- en/2016/201602XX.wml | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/2016/201602XX.wml b/en/2016/201602XX.wml index 07076ba..6e0ec55 100644 --- a/en/2016/201602XX.wml +++ b/en/2016/201602XX.wml @@ -19,9 +19,10 @@ Security Team on April 26, 2016.</p> <p>Debian 7 will also receive Long Term Support for five years after its initial release with support ending in May 2018.</p> -<p>Debian and its LTS Team would like to thank all contributing users, -developers -and sponsors who are making it possible to extend the life -of previous stable -releases, and who have made this LTS a success.</p> +<p>Debian and its LTS Team would like to thank all contributing users and +developers. We would especially like to thank the sponsors who have made +it possible to extend the life of previous stable releases, and who have +made this LTS a success.</p> <h2>About Debian</h2> -- 1.9.1
From e7fab2b5d5a972828cae28519b77affed59cd96f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Levsen <hol...@layer-acht.org> Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 14:46:14 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] add paragraph linking to wiki.d.o/LTS/Funding --- en/2016/201602XX.wml | 3 +++ 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+) diff --git a/en/2016/201602XX.wml b/en/2016/201602XX.wml index 6e0ec55..f821087 100644 --- a/en/2016/201602XX.wml +++ b/en/2016/201602XX.wml @@ -24,6 +24,9 @@ developers. We would especially like to thank the sponsors who have made it possible to extend the life of previous stable releases, and who have made this LTS a success.</p> +<p>If you rely on Debian LTS, please consider +<a href="https://wiki.debian.org/LTS/Funding";>funding the efforts</a.></p> + <h2>About Debian</h2> <p> -- 1.9.1
From 5e4cd7b99b749ff9d3aad19e1b21f28cb387cd46 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holger Levsen <hol...@layer-acht.org> Date: Tue, 9 Feb 2016 14:48:47 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] announce EOL for 20160229 --- en/2016/201602XX.wml | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/2016/201602XX.wml b/en/2016/201602XX.wml index f821087..51c1c1b 100644 --- a/en/2016/201602XX.wml +++ b/en/2016/201602XX.wml @@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ <define-tag release_date>2016-02-DD</define-tag> #use wml::debian::news -<p>The Debian Long Term Support (LTS) Team has announced that Debian 6.0 -(<q>squeeze</q>) support has reached end-of-life, five years after its initial -release on February 6, 2011.</p> +<p>The Debian Long Term Support (LTS) Team hereby announces that Debian 6.0 +(<q>squeeze</q>) support will reach its end-of-life on February 29, 2016, +five years after its initial release on February 6, 2011.</p> <p>There will be no further security support for Debian 6.0.</p> -- 1.9.1
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