Francesco Poli <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:
> You seem to have missed one occurrence of "unauthorized redistributed".
> I would suggest suppressing "unauthorized" there...
Ah, right. When doing that, I realized we could make it even more
readable. Here is the latest updated version:
c. The Contributor grants third parties the irrevocable
right to copy, use and distribute the Contribution, with
or without modification, in any medium, without royalty,
provided that, unless separate permission is granted,
redistributed modified works:
(a) do not contain misleading author, version, name
of work, or endorsement information, and
(b) do not claim endorsement of the modified work by the
Contributor, or any organization the Contributor
belongs to, the Internet Engineering Task Force
(IETF), Internet Research Task Force (IRTF), Internet
Engineering Steering Group (IESG), Internet
Architecture Board (IAB), Internet Assigned Numbers
Authority (IANA), Internet Society (ISOC), Request
For Comments (RFC) Editor, or any combination or
variation of such terms (including without limitation
the IETF "4 diamonds" logo), or any terms that are
confusingly similar thereto, and
(c) remove any claims of status as an Internet Standard,
including without limitation removing the RFC
boilerplate.
The IETF suggests that any citation or excerpt of
unmodified text reference the RFC or other document from
which the text is derived.
Thanks,
Simon
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