On Fri, Jun 14, 2002 at 01:50:07PM -0500, Branden Robinson wrote:

> These discussions have prompted me to tweak the language just a bit for
> more clarity, however:
> 
>       When this work is incorporated into a different work that is
>       ^^^^                                                 ^^^^
>       licensed under the GNU GPL, version 2, as published by the Free
>       Software Foundation, reproduction of the endorsement section
>                           ^
>       immediately after this work's copyright notice is optional
>       instead of mandatory when those notices appear as part of the
>                            ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
>       work licensed under the GNU GPL.
>       ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Would "while" be clearer than "when"?


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