[RFR] wml://support.wml

Wed, 15 May 2019 05:18:56 -0700 

Bonjour,

cette page vient d’être modifiée.

Voici une proposition de traduction.
Le fichier en anglais est téléchargeable ici :
https://salsa.debian.org/webmaster-team/webwml/raw/master/english/support.wml

Le fichier en français est téléchargeable ici :
https://salsa.debian.org/webmaster-team/webwml/raw/master/french/support.wml

Merci d’avance pour vos relectures.

Amicalement.


--
Jean-Paul

--- orig_support.wml	2019-05-15 13:55:23.093687174 +0200
+++ support.wml	2019-05-15 14:11:19.445212090 +0200
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 #use wml::debian::template title="Assistance"
-#use wml::debian::translation-check translation="b0d73a83804bc75748e1ee601f73903182b1f92a" maintainer="Jean-Paul Guillonneau"
+#use wml::debian::translation-check translation="8365a681cdb8c5a2cdeecf2b71be790e406f6d94" maintainer="Jean-Paul Guillonneau"
 #use wml::debian::toc
 
 # Translators:
@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@
 
 <toc-add-entry name="doc" href="doc/">Avant-propos</toc-add-entry>
 
-Debian est dirigée par une communauté de bénévoles. Et donc, il en est de même
-pour son assistance technique.
+Debian est dirigée et prise en charge par une communauté de bénévoles.
 
-Si cette assistance fournie par la communauté ne satisfait pas vos besoins, vous
-pouvez essayer de contacter un <a href="consultants/">consultant</a> ou, mieux,
-lire notre <a href="doc/">documentation et wiki</a>.
+Si l’assistance fournie par cette communauté ne satisfait pas vos besoins, vous
+pouvez lire notre <a href="doc/">documentation</a> ou embaucher un
+<a href="consultants/">consultant</a>.
 
+<toc-display />
 
 <toc-add-entry name="irc">Aide en ligne en temps réel à l’aide d’IRC</toc-add-entry>
 
@@ -126,11 +126,12 @@
 Groups</a>.</p>
 
 
-<toc-add-entry name="forums">Forums</toc-add-entry>
+<toc-add-entry name="web">Sites web</toc-add-entry>
+
 
 <h3>En langue anglaise</h3>
 
-<h2>Forums</h2>
+<h3 name="forums">Forums</h3>
 
 <p><a href="http://forums.debian.net";>Debian User Forums</a> est un portail sur
 le web où vous pouvez aborder des sujets relatifs à Debian, poser vos questions

commit 8365a681cdb8c5a2cdeecf2b71be790e406f6d94
Author: Paul Wise <p...@debian.org>
Date:   Sun May 12 10:53:13 2019 +0800

    Improve the introduction
    
    Move it before the ToC so that it is the first thing on the page.
    
    Remove the heading since the page is simpler without it.
    
    Improve the spelling and phrasing of the sentences.
    
    Move the documentation before consultants since often the documentation
    will be useful and can take less time and money to solve issues.
    
    Switch from "contact" to "hire" to make it more explicit consultants are paid.
    
    Fixes: commit 767ea5e93a2386f9015d096a45fe38dcc11870d9

diff --git a/english/support.wml b/english/support.wml
index f52f75d7d51..e935813e2a3 100644
--- a/english/support.wml
+++ b/english/support.wml
@@ -5,15 +5,13 @@
 <h2>%body</h2>
 </define-tag>
 
-<toc-display />
-<toc-add-entry name="foreword">Forewords</toc-add-entry>
-
-Debian is run by a community of volunteers. And, so is its support.
+Debian and its support are run by a community of volunteers.
 
-If this community-driven support doesn't fullfill your needs, you may try to
-contact <a href="consultants/">consultants</a> or, better, read our
-<a href="doc/">documentation and wiki</a>.
+If this community-driven support doesn't fulfil your needs, you may
+read our <a href="doc/">documentation</a> or
+hire a <a href="consultants/">consultant</a>.
 
+<toc-display />
 
 <toc-add-entry name="irc">On-line Real Time Help Using IRC</toc-add-entry>
 

commit d1c0690c053675784f52ebedfc8186c3e5512a66
Author: Paul Wise <p...@debian.org>
Date:   Sun May 12 10:40:57 2019 +0800

    Restore "Web sites" heading
    
    The duplicate Forums heading looks weird.
    
    Translations are still using both headings.
    
    There are other websites that could be added.
    
    Fixes: commit 062d66917d6c91c863722b781a1c1e5a90da9dd6

diff --git a/english/support.wml b/english/support.wml
index 17ae0f57ce9..f52f75d7d51 100644
--- a/english/support.wml
+++ b/english/support.wml
@@ -113,9 +113,9 @@ done using a web interface such as
 <a href="http://groups.google.com/";>Google Groups</a>.
 
 
-<toc-add-entry name="forums">Forums</toc-add-entry>
+<toc-add-entry name="web">Web sites</toc-add-entry>
 
-<h3>Forums</h3>
+<h3 name="forums">Forums</h3>
 
 # Note to translators:
 # If there is a specific Debian forum for your language you might want to

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