Paul Gevers wrote:
> + <section id="no-longer-supported-hardware">
> + <title>Hardware that's no longer supported</title>
The contraction "that's" seems out of place in a title - probably we
should just use:
<title>No longer supported hardware</title>
> + <para>
> + Due to hardware limitations, it's no longer viable for Debian
> + to build the <literal>Linux</literal> kernel supporting a
> + number of armel based devices that were supported in
> + buster. The unsupported devices are:
This sounds as if it's talking about one kernel supporting multiple
armel-based devices; if it means one kernel per device, that's plural.
Due to hardware limitations, it's no longer viable for Debian
to build the <literal>Linux</literal> kernels supporting a
number of armel-based devices that were supported in
buster. The unsupported devices are:
Or maybe:
For a number of armel-based devices that were supported in
buster, it is no longer viable for Debian to build the
required <literal>Linux</literal> kernels, due to hardware
limitations. The unsupported devices are:
> + </para>
> + <itemizedlist>
> + <listitem>
> + <para>
> + QNAP TS-109/TS-209, TS-119/TS-219 and TS-409
> + </para>
> + </listitem>
> + <listitem>
> + <para>
> + HP Media Vault mv2120
> + </para>
> + </listitem>
> + </itemizedlist>
> + <para>
> + Users of those platforms that wish to upgrade to bullseye
> + nevertheless should keep the buster APT sources enabled and,
> + before upgrading, add an APT preferences file containing
> + something like:
Users of these platforms who wish to upgrade to bullseye
nevertheless should keep the buster APT sources enabled, and
before upgrading should add an APT preferences file containing
something like:
(Or maybe as two sentences, "Before upgrading they should...")
> + <programlisting>
> +Package: linux-image-marvell
> +Pin: release a=buster
> +Pin-Priority: 900
> + </programlisting>
> + Obviously, the security support for this configuration will
> + end with the End Of Life of buster.
Obviously, the security support for this configuration will
only last until buster's End Of Life.
> + </para>
> + </section>
> </section>
> </chapter>
> --
> 2.30.2
>
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
