On Feb 18, 2012, at 12:47, Andrei POPESCU wrote: > On Sb, 18 feb 12, 12:16:40, Francesca Ciceri wrote: >> Hi,
Hi Andrei, >> we just finished the last bits of DPN for the latest issue of the Debian >> Project News to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and >> translations. > > See atached: > * a patch already commited (typos and a small rewording) > * another patch that I'd rather have ack'd by others > > See comments below for each change: > > -The Debian project is proud to have been able to > +The Debian Project is proud to have been able to > > AFAIK "Debian Project" is always capitalized. > > > family licences (including the GPL, the Affero GPL and LGPL), showing a > costant and significant increase from the previous releases. > -Sullivan based his analysis on symlinks to shared licence files and on > -regular expression matching. > > Even if the DPN audience should be quite familiar with symlinks and > regexp's, this should probably be removed. If anyone is interested in > the methodology they will probably want to see the talk anyway. > > > Holger ended his mail with a thank to IRILL who hosted the meeting and > -provide storage for the hardware when not in use. > +provides storage for the hardware when not in use. > > I can't explain why, but this "sounds better" to me :) What Holger wrote is not incorrect English grammar however. Regards, Jeremiah > Kind regards, > Andrei > -- > Offtopic discussions among Debian users and developers: > http://lists.alioth.debian.org/mailman/listinfo/d-community-offtopic > <0001-fix-a-few-typos-and-small-rewording.patch><0002-further-fixes-pending-ack-from-others.patch> -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-i18n-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: http://lists.debian.org/6b6ebfe7-a645-44a3-a1b2-59342fad3...@jeremiahfoster.com
