Filipus Klutiero wrote: >> Moray Allan announced a <a >> href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2011/07/msg00007.html";>\ >> call for DebConf13 bids</a>. > > "announcing a call" is unusual. This should probably read "sent a > call", or maybe just "called"?
If a call for bids is part of the standard routine then it can make sense to talk about announcing it (just as one might "announce a call for votes" on an -announce list), but I've switched it to "made a call". >> and add a link to<a >> href="http://wiki.debconf.org/wiki/DebConf13";>DebConf13 page</a> > Either "*the* DebConf13 page" or just "DebConf13". The former. >>There has also been >> a further <q>People behind Debian</q> interview, with >> <a >> href="http://raphaelhertzog.com/2011/07/21/people-behind-debian-martin-michlmayr-former-debian-project-leader/";>\ >> Martin Michlmayr</a>, former Debian Project Leader. > > I am not a native English speaker, sorry, but I'm not 100% sure that > "further" is the right word here. It seems unremarkable to me (en_GB), but there is quite a bit of interdialect variation with further/farther... >> These images are based on Debian 6.0.2.1 and contain kernel version 2.6.38 >> with firmware and >> a modified DHCP client for buggy MacOS X DHCP servers. > > s/MacOS X/Mac OS X/ Done. >> Michael's request is also open also those who are not yet Debian Developers. > > Something's wrong with that sentence... The second "also" should be "to". It's also slightly odd to talk about a request being open to people (as if it meant "invitation"), but never mind. >> 1099 packages were added to the unstable Debian archive recently. > > *Cough cough* Are we sure more than a thousand packages were added > in a month? I see NEW being cleared, but nothing that big. The > featured list is a lot smaller. No idea. > BTW, I saw that in the source, not sure what it is about: >> ## NOTE: >> ## should be reworded (this time only)! I don't know either. Is it something to do with the following item on podcast interviews? If so, what is it that needs to be taken into account this time? -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-i18n-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: http://lists.debian.org/20110724094734.ga22...@xibalba.demon.co.uk
