Hi, On Tue Mar 01, 2011 at 14:28:35 +0000, Justin B Rye wrote: > Martin Zobel-Helas wrote: > > On Tue Mar 01, 2011 at 12:17:35 +0000, Justin B Rye wrote: > >> It's tricky, because a lot of it is inside quotation marks. > >> > >> For instance, it quotes Martin Zobel-Helas as saying "We are happy > >> we soon can cover all continents". This is slightly awkward > >> English, but it also raises a more subtle issue: different cultures > >> have different traditional tallies for the number of continents. > > > > Feel free to reword my sentence in a way that meets our needs. > > And still leave it inside quotation marks? The best I can do is: > > <q>In combination with the GeoDNS feature used by Debian, this > should speed up downloads for our users in that geographical area > - drastically. We are happy we soon can cover all continents with > + drastically. This is a welcome improvement in the worldwide coverage of > dedicated official <code>security.debian.org</code> mirrors, administrated > by the > Debian project</q> says Martin Zobel-Helas, member of the Debian System > Administration team.</p> > > (Also committed in SVN; posting partly to be sure you get a chance to > reject it and partly in the hope that somebody can improve on it.)
it sounds good. thanks for that improvement. -- Martin Zobel-Helas <zo...@debian.org> | Debian System Administrator Debian & GNU/Linux Developer | Debian Listmaster GPG key http://go.debian.net/B11B627B | GPG Fingerprint: 6B18 5642 8E41 EC89 3D5D BDBB 53B1 AC6D B11B 627B -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-i18n-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: http://lists.debian.org/20110301210919.go13...@ftbfs.de
