On Monday 28 May 2007 19:36, Christian Perrier wrote: > Let's give another proposal.
here are my proposed changes against these. As announced on IRC, mostly for the way we prompt for space-separated lists. One advantage of the proposed text is that for the last 2 strings it makes clear that one interface name is allowed too. dhcp3-client.templates: s/However it is no longer being used./ It is, however, no longer being used./ dhcp3-relay.templates: s/You can specify multiple server names or IP addresses (as a space-separated list)./ It is possible to specify multiple server names or IP addresses (using a space-separated list)./ s/Please enter (in a space-separated list) the names of the network interfaces the DHCP relay should attempt to configure./ Please specify which network interface(s) the DHCP relay should attempt to configure. Multiple interface names should be entered as a space-separated list./ dhcp3-server.templates: s/Please enter (in a space-separated list) the interface names (e.g. eth0) on which the server should listen for DHCP requests./ Please specify on which network interface(s) the DHCP relay should listen for DHCP requests. Multiple interface names should be entered as a space-separated list./ Cheers, FJP
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