Hi James, On Saturday 21 July 2007 15:07, Petter Reinholdtsen wrote: > is available from <URL:http://james.isafreelancer.com/debian/DVD1.jpg>
Looks great, thanks! Just a few minor remarks, besides the one about mysql from Petter: - we have PostgreSQL on the DVD, but not installed by default - blender in not included (though of course it can be installed from Debian, but we probably shoulnd't advertize it, or should we?) - koffice is on the DVD but not installed by default - so I'd suggest to move those three down in the list at least - in the long text it says: "Skolelelinux is a flavor of linux", mabye better "of GNU/Linux" or "of Linux" - also in the long text, replace (the first occurance of) "Debian" with "Debian GNU/Linux" But besides that, really great! Two more things: How did you create the image? Or rather, whats the source format and can you provide the source file? And, it also says "Help & Support: http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation"; - not sure if we should fix/enhance that wiki-page or point to http://wiki.skolelinux.no/DebianEdu/Documentation/Etch - what do you think? Maybe the best is to replace it with "Online documentation: http://wiki.skolelinux.no/DebianEdu/Documentation/Etch"; - if that fits spacewise ;-) regards, Holger
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