Hi Justin, all, On 06-08-2021 19:23, Justin B Rye wrote: > Thinking about the overall structure, it might work better to move the > "good news" part to the start... > > <section id="ssh-not-available"> > <title>No new SSH connections possible during upgrade</title> > <para> > Although existing Secure Shell (SSH) connections should continue to > work through the upgrade as usual, due to unfortunate circumstances > the period when new SSH connections cannot be established is longer > than usual. If the upgrade is being carried out over an SSH > connection which might be interrupted, it's recommended to upgrade > <systemitem role="package">openssh-server</systemitem> before > upgrading the full system. > </para>
I like this. Thanks for the review (and major overhaul). Regarding part a): ssh works when only openssh-server (and required dependencies) are upgraded. Paul
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